Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Parallel poem

Based on the first "found poem" below. I took its first line and imitated its structure to produce my own poem. This time I supplied the words.

People looked at me
while I stood in line
waiting to use the drinking fountain
behind the boy whose ear
asked to be licked.
I mean . . .

it was right there
right in front of me
right when I bent forward
right when my tongue leapt out
right when the teacher pulled me out of line.

And I don’t think
she understood.

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